Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Quinn creeps towards the closet door to investigate the quiet thumping noise in the closet. As he slowly opens the door he spies a stunning monster. The hair that he could see was shaggy like a carpet and the color of lime sherbet. The hair covered its bowling pin shaped body and wiggled in the breeze that was blowing through the room. As the light from his bedroom night light flickered and went out the monster started to glow brightly in the dark. It was sucking the power out of his night light. Its eyes were in the middle of its stomach on antennae and they were tracking Quinn’s every movement. They were large and the color of the bright blue sea. The mouth was at the top of the bowling pin shape and the size of a potpie. You could here the air whoosh in and out of the black abyss of death. The inside of the mouth was full of huge white jagged teeth. The legs came out from the middle on the sides of the body. They were frog shaped. The monster started to walk forward and I was able to see a muscular lizard like tail coming out the backside of the body. That was what was making the quiet thumping noise as it waited for Quinn to open the door. The arms were long and grabby. Its sucker like hands started to reach for Quinn when his dad walked in and closed the closet door and told him he would need to clean his closet soon. YIKES! Would the monster be there waiting for him???
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I was really impressed--you have a great writing style. This sound really good.
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